It's me, Boredfan1 and I have a problem. I got logged out of my account which normally always is logged in and I can't find my log in info so I got to figure out how to either get a new password or find my old one but both seems to be eluding me right now. Anyways, I dunno how long this issue will last but sadly you will have to take over for me until I can fix this stupid issue.
Family: Yuuki Uchiha (Mother) Sora Uchiha (Father)
Years in hiding: 14
Threat level: Low
Briefly explain why you wish to have an Uchiha:
I had first had another Uchiha named Satomi Uchiha. I had deleted her because I didn’t progress her at all, I wanted to start with little abilities as Satomi started with the Sharingan. I had recently found that having a somewhat weak character at first and building up is allot of fun and take some thinking on how you want to do it. Just advancing an Uchiha to have great power is just pure amazing, and I want another project to work on as I don’t like to work on one character at a time. And I want to prove that gaining the Uchiha Freedom is possible even though it takes allot of points, I want to upgrade her to the max.
Yuuka was born into a family of the Uchiha that had been living in a small farming village within the Land of Fire. However, due to her parents caution they keep and the most out of the small village so they could make a quick and easy escape. Other than that Yuuka’s parent’s were farmers so they could put food on the table.
When Yuuka grew to the age of eight Sora, her father, decided that it was best to send her off to the Academy within the small village. Yuuki, her mother, didn’t want this as she thought that they could easily find out about her heritage. But Sora reinstated her confidence by telling her that Yuuka didn’t even know about her heritage and said it would be all fine. From that day Yuuka attended the Academy.
The first day at the Academy, Yuuka was easily able to make friends. She didn’t learn much the first day because it was a introduction to all of her teachers and classmates. She even made a friend named Asuka (This will be a Fodder character for a later Fanfiction.) and easily became best friends. From that day they did everything together and even did some things that would of normally gotten them in trouble.
During the training within the Academy they had gone through every ability, from Bukijutsu to Ninjutsu. The teachers had wanted to see where their student had stand in ability. When the first subject came up, Bukijutsu, Yuuka seem to have an above average ability within Bukijutsu, but no where near great.
Yuuka had also shown proficiency in most subjects, normally being on top of her small class. At this point they start to question her heritage as they have never meet anyone that was so advanced at such a young age. Although the Shinobi of the small village kept their suspicions secret, not wanting to worry the small farming village.
After various of other testing with different subjects, Ninjutsu had finally emerged. They started with basic techniques as all Academy students do. Yuuka had shown to be advanced at the basic techniques passing all other students because of her blood. This just made the Shinobi wonder even more than before. Had spreading rumors someone had noticed that the abilities that Yuuka had shown traits of the infamous Uchiha Clan. Once the rumors had vastly cross the small farming village, Sora had overheard one of the other ninja about the rumor. As soon as the words reached his ears he dropped everything and snuck back to his house to warn his wife and daughter.
As soon as he got into the house, Yuuki came to him to see what was wrong. Just by seeing the fear in his eyes were enough to tell Yuuki that it was time to leave. They had went to their rooms to pack the bare essentials and they pack some of Yuuka’s clothes as well. During that time Yuuka wasn’t sure what her parents were doing but by seeing their panic she decided to cooperate.
Once they had everything they needed packed, her father put Yuuka onto his shoulders so they could travel faster. Yuuka didn’t say anything but she did tear up as she realized she may never see her dear friend, Asuka, ever again. Once they were a good distance away from the village Yuuka had grown up to love she started to ask questions. Her mother just said that our love for friends and family are so strong no one can truly understand. Yuuki had referenced it as what others call, the Curse of Hatred. At that single phrase her father started to get frustrated. “Only if they knew our side.” Sora has said, sticking in Yuuka’s mind trying to figure what it completely means.
At the age of 12 her family had found a stable ground that they could easily hide and farm. They never really traded as they were in a distant land and travelers rarely ever came their way. But Sora was still worried and wanted Yuuka to survive the longest that she could to change the name of their hated clan. So in order to do this he wanted to teach her all that he could teach.
He first started with Fire Release since most Uchiha have it. He had taught her how to correctly transform her chakra into fire. The first technique he had taught her was the Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique. He had pushed Yuuka to her limits, as he wanted her to survive on her own when the time came. So Sora kept on pushing her even when Yuuka didn’t want to. When Yuuka reached 13 Sora noticed that she had learned Fire Release well, even enough that could match his own if Yuuka were to try her absolute best.
Yuuki had then taken over Yuuka’s training. Her parents had thought that teaching her the concepts of Genjutsu would be perfect, due to the fact that she is an Uchiha. Yuuki had taught Yuuka all the concepts that she had known of. Yuuka shown great ability in Genjutsu and seems that Sora and Yuuki could teach her the technique that they have used extensively, the Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique.
To their surprise Yuuka was able to even trick her father with this technique. He had eventually figured out he was in an illusion because things shifted quite fast. Sora didn’t really punish her but did see the potential in her. Yuuka then tried it on her mother Yuuki. Right as the Genjutsu was cast Yuuki broke out of it seconds later. She was a little ashamed but noticed that Yuuka took a liking to Genjutsu.
Yuuka wanted to even teach her daughter another technique that involved the first one she learned. It was called, Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique the child of the first Genjutsu she learned. This was able to completely trick her father, since he didn’t use Genjutsu whatsoever. It took him a while before he found out, when Yuuka started to lose control of the technique.
They were surprised to see that Yuuka was able to trick her father for so long. This had intrigued them and saw great potential in her. So they decided to allow her freedom that she had been asking for. But there was one catch, that she message them her progress every month. If not, they would go out looking for her and bring her back home.
Wanting to explore the world, Yuuka instantly took the opportunity and packed the bare essentials. She had started her travels to Konohagakure making sure that she doesn’t make her heritage so apparent, as her parents had warned her.
First off shes already becoming to strong by having proficeny in Kenjutsu, Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu, and having knowledge of 2 chakra natures. And there is no paper to show your second affinity yet so dont even do that. How would she know Kenjutsu who taught her, also no not all Uchiha have Fire Release though it is most common just wanted to say that. Also really she wants to have brighter goals and eliminate all evil, you dont even give a reason why or why she wants to bring greatness to her clan. The thing that got to me the most was that you didnt explain how her parents survived the Massacre simply that they are farmers.
Application Accepted, you are now allowed to make her page and put the Uchiha Template on her. Her background here must be the same on the page and failure to do so will result in here deletion unless given a good reason why.
How will your character awaken this dōjutsu?: In the RP, Appearance, Daichi Uchiha faces off against a powerful who can use Sage Mode. Forced to fight like a cornered dog, Daichi has sustained serious injuries that would render less men unable to fight however, his sheer will to defeat his opponent has allowed him to continue fighting. Unfortunately, he has no weapons available, no allies and the injuries he has sustained has seriously cut down his stamina and chakra reserves. Daichi would unlock the Sharingan due to the extreme stress of the situation and his will to survive.
Briefly but in detail explain what the Sharingan will do for your character if approved: Should he be approved, Daichi would be able to survive his harsh hunters like his current opponent Yaichi and allow him to take a step closer to fulfulling his life's goal while looking upon the world with a new perception.What is your complete reason for wanting the Sharingan?: Attaining the Sharingan would allow me to save Daichi from becoming a slave to Yaichi's criminal organization which I fear will happen however, it will also allow me to learn how using a dojutsu, particularly Sharingan works as well as give me an opportunity to learn to use genjutsu properly.Not only would this do wonders for my own skill and experience, but it would give me what I need to further expand the Unofficial Writing And Roleplaying Guide as to increase both the number of RP's going and help everyone possible increase their skill dramaticaly in roleplaying and character creation.
You have been allowed the Sharingan, you can place Genjutsu: Sharingan on your character, and must make your own original techniques for it. You are allowed to only up the 2 tomoe version of it for this rp after this you make go further. You have nearly all the abilities the sharingan gives you, to knoew exactly what it does go to the sharingan page. Read about which abilities you have access to at only 2 tomoe.
Because your suppose to create your own original genjutsu for the Sharingan, it may not have been on purpose but their is already a sharingan technique used to reverse a genjutsu so you can make something like it.
As you know, there are warrior monks in the Naruto world and people are free to make one however, there is no template for one and the only known temple is in the Land of Fire.
Me and NJ are both making out own temples for our monks and their way of being a monk to teach others how to be monks their way that way there is 3 and not 1. However, monks do not have ninja registration codes, never attended the academy etc so their template would be much different than a normal shinobi's.
That is why I request permission to make (not me personally as I dunno how to make one) a infobox template for the three temples. Most people forget about the monks and so they don't explore that aspect of the Naruto world as they fight much differently than shinobi or samurai.
This would actually encourage people to make a warrior monk character and expand their knowledge, experience and comfort in roleplaying as well as doing fanfictions. With an increase of monks, that would likely mean less rogue/missing ninja and less shinobi with a kekkei genkai.
It's not really an issue if you say no but it would be much easier if you said yes.
Since were going to have a monk one for everybody, i need you guys to decided on a color we already dont have, or 2 colors we havent combined together. Also what will be included onto the infobox since i dont think their going to need to part about ninjas and stuff.
IDK about the colors tbh, I didn't pay attention enough to the different colors to remember most of them, I only remember the more common ones though I do wish to suggest to NJ that he use brown for his temple.
As for the stuff for the other stuff for the template, I think I can handle that and get back to you.
Edit: I think I have what would be used, tell me what you think.
Other Afilliations (the temple they are serving at, not listed)
Tetsu was a dude that was born blind in Kumogakure, he had no friends because of his handicap, and had a rough life. But for some reason, when he was young, he would cry all the time, not because he was blind, but when his parents or someone would ask him what was wrong, he would say he misses his brother. But those that knew Tetsu's parents, knew that Tetsu hand no brothers, no sisters, so people would think something was wrong with him. They would just think that it was his imagination, or the reason that he was just a child. As he got older, he would still talk about how he missed his brother, but he never told his name, or any info on him, so people just thought he was a crazy blind kid at this point.
When he became a chunin, he decided to go to the doctor to see if he could maybe do an operation to implant someone else eyes into his bad eyes. When the doctor went to try and open Tetsu's eyes, they wouldn't open, nothing would open them, the doctor then said that it was because of his crying. Since he kept his eyes closed and cried a lot, the doctor thought it was sealed shut and couldn't be opened. So Tetsu Went on with his life, he eventually became a Jonin, then a Jonin council member. But, he would still talk about this brother that everyone thought was just imagination. Then on this one mission, he would finally open his eyes and reveal the truth about his so called brother, and tell everyone about him.
On this mission, Kaizen, Joshin, Raiden Hoshima,Aiko and Tetsu, went to hunt down this international ninja who was very skilled in Dark Release. The ninja was plotting to get a group of ninja to go on a killing spree, just go to random places and kill people. At the time Tetsu and his team were requested, the group of ninja lead by this Dark Release ninja had already killed over 200 people over the Land of Lightning over a course of 1 week. Tetsu's team pinpointed where him and his group of ninja were, and when Tetsu and his team got to the location, there were over 150 ninja there. Tetsu and his team attack, they kill the majority of the weak ninja, but the remaining 12 Jonin level ninja including the Dark Release ninja were still alive.
Kaizen being a hot head attacked first with his Lightning Release Armour killing 3 of them, but eventually because of all the fighting, his Armour weakened and the Dark Release ninja absorbed his Armour. Before he was able to use it against Kaizen Joshin intervened and saved Kaizen. Aiko and Raiden were handling the other ninja, they both killed 3 more of them, which left them with 6 more rogue ninja left including the Dark Release one. But the problem was, all that fighting left Tetsu and his team low on chakra and stamina. Tetsu went to attack the Dark Release ninja, but had his techniques he used taken. Tetsu was running out of Chakra, Joshin was then overpowered by 3 of the remaining ninja and was knocked out, Kaizen was still trying to recover from just about all his chakra being taken, Raiden and Aiko were still fighting and killed 2 other ninja, before being overpowered by the Dark Release ninja. There were 4 rogue ninja remaining, and Tetsu and his team were on the verge of getting beaten my the, the Dark Release ninja then went to go and kill Raiden and Aiko, but Raiden with his last bit of effort used Wind Control: Pressurized Hurricane, the Dark Release ninja absorbed the technique and Raiden passed out.
Tetsu, was back up and was fighting the other 3 ninja, he killed 2 of them and the last one, Kaizen used the last bit of chakra he had to kill him. Now the Dark Release ninja was left, but Tetsu was on the verge of passing out because of lack of chakra. Kaizen was also on the verge of passing out, Raiden, Aiko, and Joshin were already passed out. Tetsu and Kaizen then go to Raiden, Aiko, and Joshin to try and wake them up, when they couldn't, Tetsu told Kaizen that they might need to retreat. But, the Dark Release ninja didn't let them do that, he held his hand out and said that he was about to fire a combination off all the techniques he absorbed fro Tetsu and his team, Tetsu knew that all those techniques fired together would kill them all. Kaizen at the time passed out, and Tetsu was about to pass out, then the Dark Release ninja fired the combined techniques in one wave of chakra. As Tetsu and his team were about to get hit, Tetsu cried, then his eyes opened revealing the Rinnegan. Then the amount of chakra was then absorbed by the Preta Path ability that Tetsu's Rinnegan had.
The Dark Release Ninja was baffled at what happened, and then Tetsu found out how to use the Preta Path to replenish his chakra, not only that, he was able to give chakra back to Kaizen, Raiden, Aiko, and Joshin. Kaizen and the others wake up with their Chakra replenished, they then attack the Dark Release person at the same time, he couldn't absorb all those attacks at the same time, so the techniques used at the same time ended up killing him. Tetsu didn't know what happened at all, but when his team looked at him they say his eyes were opened and had the Rinnegan. When Kaizen and the others asked what happened, Tetsu passed out.
When they got back to Kumo, they all went to the hospital to be checked out. When they all got better, which was about a week later, they went to file their report. But, Tetsu had his eyes closed and glasses back on, he told his team not to tell anyone about his new eyes, and so they didn't. When they left the Raikage's office, Tetsu wanted all them to meet at his house. There he said, "Remember how I used to and still did talk about my brother, well when I was recovering for that whole week, while I was sleep, I found out who my brother it." he told them.
This is what Tetsu told them, Tetsu was alive way before any of them, even before Madara and Hashirama. As a matter of fact, Tetsu told them that he was made by the the Sage of Six Paths using his Creation of All Things technique. The Sage made him because at the time, his son's were doing what they were doing what they wanted to do. So the Sage had nothing to do, no one talk to or anything, basically he was getting lonley. So the Sage using his Creation of All Things technique, he made a brother, which was Tetsu. The Sage wanted the brother to feel like he was a blood related, so he gave Tetsu the Rinnegan, all the paths and techniques he had, and even look like him. The Sage didn't tell anyone else, not even his children. The Sage and Tetsu had great times talking and Tetsu made a bond with the Sage and it felt to both of them that they really were brothers.
Then when the Sage died, Tetsu was heart broken, and instead he took his brothers kindness and went to help people in need. But, he still missed his brother and didn't have another bond with anyone like he did the Sage. So what he did was, using the Creation of All Things technique, Tetsu inserted his DNA into a this woman he helped an he met in this land, (which was later the land of lighting), he made it to where in the next 1000 years, a child would be born just like him, with the same name, not the same look, peaceful intention, and with the rinnegan.
Eventually the Tetsu that the Sage made died, and eventually the 1000 years passed. But, through all the genes and DNA mix ups from that lady the older Tetsu put his DNA into, the New Tetsu which was born 1000 years later would only have the same name different look, would awaken his rinnegan later in life with the Preta Path, was blind, and had peaceful intention. Also, he wouldn't have any of the technique the older Tetsu had, so he had to make his own.
Well, after my first denied app, I thought about it, and I figured out that I could do something with Tetsu, so why not try to see if he can get the Rinnegan. Also Tetsu was the first character I made on this wiki, and I haven't really done anything with him.
First Tetsu is not a well done character, the amount of time hes been around isnt enough. He has to have lots of great info on his page and there is barely anything on him. Though i admit i do like your story it is really good and is a creative way of gaining the Rinnegan. Also no im sorry but i need an official technique with a description of how it works and what it does. Also no chakra absorption from the preta path as of yet. It must be an original technique the Preta isnt about chakra absorption it is about greed. The pretas power comes from its greed, nagato uses this by stealing chakra reserves from others. Think of a new way to show this greed other then chakra absorption. It must require a good detailed summary of what it does, which path it is from, and a downside of it. With the other stuff such as why you want the Rinnegan and what he will use it for. It needs to be an amazing reason other then power, or for peace. They should all be a paragraph long, and full of info. You must explain to me also why he needs the rinnegan, how does it change his life, how does he affect the world around him, and how others see him. Im not denying this ok, just go back and rework Tenshi and complete everything else i asked then post it on this same thread.
Also forgot to mention dont put that part about them being like brothers his relationship with the Sage should not be to great. And finally you talk like he has had the Rinnegan since forever, no he must awaken it for the first time within an rp thats how this works lol so rework that a bit to.
Ok so this replaces the paragraph: This is what Tetsu told them, Tetsu was alive way before any of them, even before Madara and Hashirama. As a matter of fact, Tetsu told them that he was made by the the Sage of Six Paths using his Creation of All Things technique. The Sage made him because at the time, his son's were doing what they were doing what they wanted to do. So the Sage had nothing to do, no one talk to or anything, basically he was getting lonley. So the Sage using his Creation of All Things technique, he made a brother, which was Tetsu. The Sage wanted the brother to feel like he was a blood related, so he gave Tetsu the Rinnegan, all the paths and techniques he had, and even look like him. The Sage didn't tell anyone else, not even his children. The Sage and Tetsu had great times talking and Tetsu made a bond with the Sage and it felt to both of them that they really were brothers.
Instead of a brother, the Sage created Tetsu so he could talk to someone before he died, the reason why is because his sons were off doing their thing. Using the Creation of All Things, the Sage made Tetsu. Another reason why he made Tetsu was to keep the peace going, so therefor the Sage gave Tetsu the Rinnegan, all the paths, and just about all the techniques he had. When Tetsu was made, the Sage and him talked a lot, he gave Tetsu his own personality, and own everything. The Sage also gave Tetsu instructions to try and keep the piece while he was gone by helping as many people as he could. It was as if Tetsu was a robot that had a specific mission to do.
(This replaces the part about him seeming to have the Rinnegan: When he became a chunin, he decided to go to the doctor to see if he could maybe do an operation to implant someone else eyes into his bad eyes. When the doctor went to try and open Tetsu's eyes, they wouldn't open, nothing would open them, the doctor then said that it was because of his crying. Since he kept his eyes closed and cried a lot, the doctor thought it was sealed shut and couldn't be opened.)
When he became a chunin, he decided to go to the doctor to see if he could maybe do an operation to implant someone else eyes into his bad eyes. When the doctor went to try and open Tetsu's eyes, they opened, and the doctor made an observation. Tetsu's whole eye was just completely white, no pupil not even any veins. So the doctor thought that Tetsu was born with dead eyes, there was nothing they could do because the eyes had no blood vessels, so that meant that no blood flow went to they eyes. Even if they were to be replaced, no blood would get to the new eyes. When Tetsu was told the news, he wasn't sad or anything, he just went on with his life.
The reasons why Tetsu would have the Rinnegan is to not only finally be able to see, but to make a whole new style of jutsu, called Ninkenjutsu. Which would combine Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu, similar to Nintaijutsu, he would also like to teach it to other people. Without the Rinnegan it wouldn't be possible for him to make Ninkenjuts because it would require hand and eye coordination, even with his Mole Barrier, it only allows him to detect anything that moves. This is a reason why Tetsu would have the Rinnegan.
If Tetsu was to have the Rinnegan, he would have to let it be known to people in order to make his new jutsu he wants to make. Also he would have to get used to some things, because at first, he would be able to tell how people looked by there voice or smell, now since he would have sight, he would see there faces and it will be different for him. Also things would be weird for him, the way people dress, or what things like snow and stuff looks like. It would be like he was a newborn baby, then if people thought he was crazy then, they will really think he was crazy now. The reason being, because he would do things that people do on a regular basis and react differently towards it. For example, cookies, using his mole barrier he knew the shape of the cookie, but he didn't know the color of it, so his reaction to it may be, what is this color called? Also, a downfall to having sight is that, now he would have to get his reflexes up, now that he would have sight, he would need to be able to see whatever he needs to dodge, and then react to moving out of the way. It would take him a bit to try and get his reflexes up to where it was before with his Mole Barrier.
The technique that I will make will be called Element Absorption Technique, also I have worked on Tetsu, now if you accept this part and the technique I made, all I would need is just an rp to awaken the Rinnegan
I accept, Now place the Rinnegan within the Kekkei Genkai spot on Tetsu, and add that jutsu you created to him. I also grant him all 5 chakra natures, plus Yin, Yang, and Yin-Yang. You r character now has 1/3 the power of the outer path which grants hims the Six Paths Technique with this he is allowed to have the Preta Path, and can only use techniques from that path. You will only gain more once a few months have passed and your characters story has developed over time. You are now a Rinnegan user and one of the few that will reside here dont abuse his powers or they will be taken. also any change in his background will require me to take the Rinnegan away.