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JakCooperThePlumber

aka Jak

  • I live in Soul Palace
  • I was born on July 10
  • My occupation is YouTuber
  • I am Male
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  • Hi Jack, 

    I'm letting you know that you have been unblocked as we have decided to give you another chance. If you decide to come back, please understand that our rules and regulations are heavily under construction right now so please leave me a message if you do decide to come back and I'll tell you what direction the rules are going so you don't have any problems you yourself don't crrate. Anyways, I hope you come back.

    Regards, 

    ~Boredfan1~

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  • Thats right i said your turn you didnt think i would let you go so easily. You copied my stratetegy and even worse you did not explain that it was a clone. So i wont let you leave, im coming at you with everything i got and this wont end until one of us is dead.

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    • I also hope you know you cant pull stuff out of your ass, if he was the real one from the beginning you cant make him a clone just so you can do this. Ive known from thebegining of the fight to use Gengaku as a clone thats how he battles people. But you im sure were used your real character and only decided to change that last minute.

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    • and if you choose not to continue your character automactically dies

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  • Listen, your going to have to use less categories because the categories list is super extensive and needs to be cut down. Stop adding + and - to techniques because that's not proper and I know I have been I'm getting rid of it. As for technique categories, do not make categories specially for one person's techniques, file it under their category. Also, delete the type part of categories, it looks like an improper category. Finally, don't use No Chakra Flow because there is no point in mentioning it if it isn't being used.  Please fix these problems as soon as possible, it is important.

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    • You mean I can't list the type of technique it is in the categories?  I'd think that'd be pretty important.  And besides, you've also done that before, too. 

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    • Its true a technique should not be added to alot of catergories maybe 4 max 

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    • Shouldn't I add each character that can use the technique? 

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    • Type is like offensicve, defensive, supplemental, ninjutsu, genjutsu and so forth which is proper to add but adding a category  callec Osho Fusaku's Technique for example to every technique doesn't help anything, it just makes too many categories. If it is a technique someone created, add their name to it to put it under their category otherwise, it doesn't make sense to add each character who can use the technique onto the category list since while yes, they can use it, it isn't technically theirs because they didn't invent it.

      Adding Type: Supplemental I have realized makes it look improper, it just needs to be Supplemental by itself. However, Sage is wrong, 4 isn't the max. I put who created the technique, if it has hand seals, each hand seal if possible, rank without the - and +, range, what it's chakra nature is if it has one or no chakra nature if it doesn't which doesn't apply to techniques which don't use chakra, whether or not it has a parent technoque, the parent technique, whether or not it has a child technique and each of those if it has one. That way there is plenty to find it under but nothing unnecessary like adding No Chakra Flow which most techniques don't use unless it's with a weapon like a sword or kunai.

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  • Starting with your Full Body Saber Technique, it is utterly impossible and suicidal. If you have swords coming out of your body, the damage you would take is enourmous, life threatening. So no way does it work. Next, your Massive Reverse Stretch Sword technique is severely over powered. It shouldn't be able to level an entire large village with ease and the size of it would be impossible to create with the limited amount of chakra your character posses plus, the speed of sound is likewise impossible for any sword, no matter it's size. Same problem with the Stretch Sword technique, it goes too long and frankly, swords should never be able to go the length of a bow or farther.  The last thing I need to mention is that your Daggers Dive Bomb also requires Explosion Release chakra for it to work or it won't explode. 

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    • Why can only one character use it?  That doesn't make any sense.  Any technique,e xcept for a Kekkei Genkai or Tota, can be learned by anyone. 

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    • Actually, Tota are not necessarally bloodline specific and the reason only one person can use it is because they are powerful techniques which make the user unique and since it's very much like the Bleach techniques, it's good that not too many can use it at once. I'm limiting my most powerful techniques to a few people lol.

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  • on the rp

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  • I'm not trying to hassle you or anything but do you even have a battle strategy for your character or are you trying to make him prepared for anything but giving him tons of techniques that defends against every possibility and that are super powerful? 

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  • Yang Release is all about physical energy so becoming intangible wouldn't really be possible with this release, Yin Release or Yin-Yang Release is more appropiate, the latter being the best. Please note that this technique cannot be used with your invisibility technique otherwise your character will be totally invisible however, it can be allowed if both being active at once drains a more than their combined total. Another thing, stop using - and + for all your techniques, it should really be a solid B. And this technique's range is self, not all.

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  • Unless it's an exceptionally powerful invisibility technique which would have to be approved since it would be borderline over powered, the standard Sharingan as well as the Rinnegan and any other dojutsu that sees chakra would be able to detect someone invisible using this technique, regardless of their skill level or experience.

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  • Look at it's wall and reply there by hovering your mouse over add topic then clicking on the edit option.

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  • Look at his wall.

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    • The reason I put plot on my character articles is because that's where I'm going to put a summery of the plot for each arc they're involved in at.  I model all my character pages off of the character pages on the Bleach wiki because, as you know, I used to be on Bleach FanFiction Wiki. 

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    • Lol, that doesn't make sense honestly. You can mention in trivia or something the events they have participated in or are participating in but it's better to put a link to a page affiliated with it because if it's not for your character, then it doesn't do anything but take up room. Also, it also confuses people about your character. And last but not least, reply to the wall lol, that is what it is there for.

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    • I noticed you added a techniques section but unless your going to say how he uses them and how well, it will be a waste of your time and a waste of space, your suppose to use the techniques section of the infobox to list it and leave the information of the techniques on their respective pages. How they use it though can be put underneath their section such as taijutsu or ninjutsu and don't need to be anything other than a sub section to one of those.

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